Heir of Light: Elarion's Hope (Draft Phase)
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Pro dospěléRozepsáno27m
Naposledy publikováno pát, čvn 20, 2025
This is an original story of mine, picking themes, abilities, ideas, and settings from my favorite stories with my own twist.
The magic system is similar to Naruto but slightly more grounded. I am trying to give my characters a very realistic and personal feel to them.
I'd appreciate any feedback.
This is only a testing phase, I won't be posting any more than this until the finished product. I dislike when stories are halfway through on here then just seem to never finish. That is why this will be all you get till a finished story. This is more to gauge whether people would want a story like this and get people excited for a finished product.
I ask for patience, it will take me a long time to write between work and other responsibilities. I hope you enjoy chapters 1-4, praise and constructive criticism are more than welcomed.
3rd person Limited POV
I'm trying to figure out how to italicize words on Wattpad for internal thoughts, it says it doesn't work with my font. Any help is appreciated.
Všechna práva vyhrazena
Připoj se k největší komunitě vypravěčůZískej personalizovaná doporučení příběhů, ukládej si oblíbené do své knihovny a komentováním i hlasováním buduj komunitu.
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