Such a Lonely Heart
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They said the house was hers. A gift. A promise. A time capsule.
So when the boys come back in 2025, everything feels the same, messy bun, Doc Martens, black lipstick, beer-stained cushions, and inside jokes that never died. Comforting. Nostalgic. Safe.
Until one of them finds something they were never meant to read.
And suddenly, the past doesn't feel so innocent anymore.
Prompts used (subtly):
. killers to... (to killers)
. whatever is written comes true the next day
. you're being followed, you don't know why
. Y/N puts their hair in a bun and wrote the next scene
. "...and suddenly they-"
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Written: 11 June 2025
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