Broken

Broken

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Some wounds never close. Some hearts never heal. At just twelve years old, Elian Carter's world shatters the day his father walks out and never looks back. Left with a struggling mother and a younger sister who depends on him, Elian learns early what it means to survive without comfort, answers, or love. Quiet, gifted, and far more mature than his age, Elian hides behind his drawings and stories - the only places he can create the kind of world he longs to live in. But even those safe spaces begin to darken when his first experience with love becomes something twisted and traumatic - a girl who corners him, threatens him, and rewrites his innocence into something fearful and stained. From adolescence to adulthood, Elian searches for something real - a connection, a reason, a love that doesn't break him. But every step forward pulls him deeper into loneliness. His calm exterior masks a lifetime of silent battles. And as years pass, he begins to wonder if some people were simply never meant to be loved. Broken is a raw, emotional journey of a boy who grows into a man still haunted by love that never was. A heartbreaking coming-of-age story about betrayal, longing, and the quiet tragedy of never finding what you're searching for.
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Broken

He doesn't go by Duke anymore. Once a foster kid lost in the system, now seventeen-year-old Richard is trying to rewrite his life-one therapy session, one heartbreak, one journal entry at a time. Haunted by trauma, shaped by loss, and carrying the weight of abuse no child should have known, Richard clings to the only things that feel real: his chosen family of friends, and the fragile hope that maybe-just maybe-there's something waiting for him on the other side of survival. Brooke, his childhood friend and emotional anchor, is unraveling beneath the surface. Ronny, a teen father with dreams bigger than his circumstances, is battling demons no one sees. David, the quiet protector, gives more than he gets. And Lynsee, fierce and faith-worn, carries her identity like armor in a world eager to dismantle it. When grief reopens old wounds and love arrives too late, Richard is forced to face the truth: some people break quietly. Others shatter in public. And sometimes, no matter how hard you try to hold the ones you love together, they slip through your hands anyway. Broken is a raw, unforgettable portrait of adolescence, resilience, and the invisible scars that shape who we become. Told with piercing emotional clarity and poetic grit, this is a story about what happens when survival isn't enough-and healing becomes its own kind of war.

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