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BANI MEIN SHYAAM {His Unfinished Hymn}
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  • Parts 5
  • Time 2h 30m
Ongoing, First published Jun 13
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🪔Prem ke rang me aisi doobi ban gya ik hi roop , 
Prem ki mala japte japte ajj 
"Bani Mein Shyaam"🪔


🌸 Sita Tomar :-A quiet soul lost in devotion.
She didn't seek love - she lived it, like a prayer.
Bhakti was her language, and Krishna her forever.


🔱 Veideh Agnivanshi :-A warrior of the land, not of temples.
He believed in karma, not chants - until he met her.
With her, even silence felt like surrender.

🪷"Just as Radha and Krishna were never truly apart...
we too are no longer two.
I've dissolved into you...
and you've become the song of my every breath."🪷

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Sita (standing before the Radha-Krishna murti, softly):
"Prem mere liye sirf ek bhaav nahi...
yeh meri bhakti hai - aur bhakti ka arth hai poorn samarpan.
Jahan na shartein hoti hain, na swaarth... sirf ek pavitra arpan hota hai."

Veideh (kneeling, folding hands, eyes fixed on her feet ):
"Toh aaj, tumhare  Radha-Krishna ke saamne,
main tumse tumhari bhakti ki agya maangta hoon, Sita.
Sirf prem nahi, ek aise samarpan ki ijazat chahta hoon
jahan har saans mein tum ho, har pooja mein tumhara naam.
(He touched her feet , a drop of tear washed her feet ) 
Mujhe apna banne do - na adhikar se, na ichchha se sirf samarpan se "

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"This is not just a love story - it's a soulful journey of devotion, surrender, and divine union.🪷🪔

To feel it, to live it... take a step inside the book."📚
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