Critique Me Again | Taekook
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Jeon Jungkook built his empire with silence, structure, and a pen that never wavered. A celebrated author and the cold-blooded CEO of Korea's largest publishing house, he thought he had mastered the game of literature - until a critique shattered him.
Kim Taehyung didn't just review his book.
He eviscerated it.
Dark, seductive, and maddeningly brilliant, Taehyung writes like sin - raw, brutal, beautiful. The kind of man who turns trauma into poetry and lovers into ghosts. He doesn't write for money. He writes to burn.
Now Jungkook wants him.
Wants to own the words that destroyed him.
Wants the man who dared to say: "You don't bleed on the page. You hide."
But Taehyung doesn't sign contracts. He signs scars.
And when the lines blur between critique and craving, who's really rewriting whom?
A story of ink, power, obsession - and a love that tastes like revenge.
Top Taehyung
Bottom Kook
Published 14th June 2025
Ended - 4th August 2025
Word count 150000 to 200000 words
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HIS RAVAGED LOVE (TK)
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