Debbie Oaks
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NOTE: This story was first drafted a thriller and I dubbed it 'Withered Rose'. (Hence the rose on the cover) I then later swapped the drafted chapters to make it an action book and named it Debbie Oaks (like the main main character) The first chapter is, however, unchanged.
Debbie Oaks- Genius, sick of her sister, pretty, thought shy, almost invisible, single
Lilly Oaks- Bitch, jealous, cheerleading captain, Queen B of Riverside High, spoiled brat, dating a criminal
They're both sisters. Twins. Polar opposites. They both detest each other. Want to kill the other. They're both 16, and while Debbie works part-time at a cafe, Lilly's at nightclubs and doing wild things.
Enter Jade Black- a 17-year-old master thief, sworn enemy of Lilly's boyfriend and new guest at the cafe where Debbie works. Approaching Debbie was never her plan- but after realizing how useful Debbie could be she makes her an offer. Which Debbie accepts.
It should have been simple. Help a thief, bring down a criminal, step out of a sister's shadow, never worry about it again. Then Jade and Debbie fall for each other- and nothing is ever the same. After all, all cats have claws- it's just the matter if you use them or remove them.
Word count: 20,000- 25,000 words
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