Echo of Her Breath
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ECHO OF HER BREATH
A decade ago, Theodora Whitman died.
For Lenora, the weight of that loss has never faded. She built her life on one unshakable belief: her sister had been murdered-and incompetence let her killer walk free.
Now, as an FBI profiler, Lenora has returned to Manhattan, drawn by a string of new murders that mirror the very past she has tried to leave behind.
The further they dig into the present-day case, the deeper her understanding of the past becomes.
Secrets are being uncovered. Lies are unraveling. Shameful truths are coming to light.
With each step forward, Lenora is forced to confront a reality far more painful-and far more complicated-than she ever imagined.
One that began with someone who should never have been trusted...
And ended with a version of Theo she wasn't ready to face.
Because when love turns to obsession and grief curdles into vengeance-
The past doesn't just echo.
It screams.
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