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Last published Mon, Aug 11, 2025
He was chaos in a tracksuit. She was the silence between notes.
Luna Visser never believed in hype-especially not in artists like Joost Klein. But when the Conservatory brings him in as a guest teacher for a month, everything about her carefully measured world starts to glitch.
Between music projects, late-night studio sessions, and too many questions left unasked, Luna finds herself pulled into a loop she didn't expect-one filled with noise, rhythm, and something dangerously close to feeling.
This was never supposed to be a love story.
But some songs write themselves.
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