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Woman in the Counter
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Ongoing, First published Jun 19
Mature
By Prem

A 19-year-old boy working at a demolition site falls for a quiet, older woman (23-24) who helps at her father's shop. Their only interaction - a silent touch, a dropped pen, and one charged night - sparks an emotional obsession.
He returns every day in hopes of seeing her again, overthinks every glance, and navigates the haunting silence she leaves behind... while her mother unexpectedly acknowledges the connection.
As time and fate threaten to close the chapter, he's torn between moving on and making a move - knowing one wrong step could destroy the sacred chaos they accidentally created.
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