Star Wars Jedi: A balance in the force
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A young padawan by the name of Khoan Talis who trained under a powerful Jedi master during the clone wars. His master always seemed very loyal to the order but she knew the truth of his attachment, having a family herself.
When his closest friend Ashoka is accused of committing a crime that was committed by his other friend Barris. He ends up fighting her, but during their fight, he realises that some of her reasons behind the attack he can understand.
As their fight comes to its finale, he tells her he is going to fake kill her, and when she gets to a ship to go to the planet Dagobah and he will meet her there as soon as he can.
When Ashoka announces that she is leaving the order decides to leave the order alongside her.
Before leaving the temple he meets with Anakin and Obi-Wan that he will protect her with his life, and gives them a comms device with an encrypted signal so it can't be traced.
As Ashoka and Khoan enter their ship, he sets the coordinates to head for Dagobah, confusing Ashoka.
While flying Khoan uses his secure Comms device to contact two other people he cherished, Master Cere Junda and her apprentice Trilla Suduri to inform them of what has happened at the temple and to inform them of where they can be found.
Years later, Khoan finds himself on Bracca in search of other Jedi that are in hiding. while there, he finds 2 surprises. A young padawan he once hung out with and a sith inquisitor he too hung out with.
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