Fanfiction and Criticism

Fanfiction and Criticism

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Parts 2

Ongoing11m

Last published Sat, Jun 28, 2025

anime comics crack criticism dxd

Here to see me bashing fanfic tropes and all that jazz? Hope on in and take my criticisms with a grain of salt oh lord.

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