The Deep

The Deep

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Wed, Sep 23, 2026
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Fiction
Fantasy
Science Fiction
Humanity's last hope for paradise lies submerged beneath the Atlantic Ocean: Nereilora, also known as The Deep. Advertised as a land of endless opportunity where you can be anything you desire, the government paints a perfect picture for a vision so grand you'd never want to leave. But that's precisely what they want you to think. Frederick arrived in The Deep seeking his dream: to be a celebrated pianist. What he found instead was a suffocating reality. He plays for pennies in a rundown bar, his days a monotonous cycle of poverty and despair, barely enough to survive, let alone afford a laser gun to end it all. The TV ads back on land never show the rampant poverty, the lawlessness, or the crushing darkness that truly defines life in Nereilora. And they certainly don't mention the most critical rule: once you're in The Deep, you can't leave. For Frederick, this isn't paradise; it's his personal hell, and he can't fathom why his friend thinks a pen pal program with someone from the surface could possibly make it tolerable. Meanwhile, on land, Henrietta navigates the grimy streets of New New York. Her life is a constant hum of angry customers in the diner, the frequent shouts of rioters demanding change. She tells herself it's "simple but pretty good," even as she buys canned air for her apartment and her boyfriend, who calls her "Hen" for "squawking," becomes increasingly volatile. He's sweet only when he wants to be, his drunken "rough lovemaking" and attempts to "hit some sense into her" dismissed with a self-assured thought that she can always lock the door. To Henrietta, escape is a foreign concept; her life is just fine. So why did her well-meaning friend sign her up for The Deep's mysterious pen pal program, as if she needed a way out? Two different worlds, two lives teetering on the edge. What secrets will surface when their realities collide, and can a connection across the depths offer a lifeline... or only pull them further into The Deep?
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I stood with my back to her, shielding her, and my murderous eyes stared down at the poor excuse of a man, promising unimaginable pain if he dared to move or even flinch. The enormity of control it took me to suppress the impulse to eradicate the piece of scum, who dared to even think about laying a hand on a woman, was inconceivable. My whole body was trembling with rage. The guy was intimidated by the fury in my eyes and stumbled back to his intoxicated friends who were too dazed to understand the situation. I was disappointed and relieved at the same time that the chaos didn't end in a fist fight. When I turned around to console her, she was gone. And as I looked around, I saw her back just leaving the bar through the entrance. I hurried out to follow her. She walked ahead of me aimlessly and disoriented like a wounded animal that had just escaped the claws of death. My heart ached for her. I found a kindred soul in her. She evidently had been wounded in the past. Just like me. But in an even worse way than I had been hurt, and it angered me, that someone had dared to harm her. *** Eden Marie Simmons is still recovering after escaping an abusive relationship when she meets Keane, the broody and enigmatic neighbor who is shrouded in mystery. Both are still being haunted by their past and are not ready for a new commitment, but when fate repeatedly puts them in each other's paths, they can't deny their attraction for each other. Life challenges them both with secrets, lies, and broken trusts, and confronts them with their pasts. They both must learn to be brave enough to love again. *** Story is previously called "Paradise Lies"

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