my first story .. so you are all welcome to criticize it.. sorry for my bad english.. pls bare with it.. open for suggestions and comment..
hope you love it..
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"Don't you get it, you're mine, the sooner you realise it the better."
The first chapters are so bad but it was my first time writing and I don't know what I was thinking but it gets better :)