Yes My Commander
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Last published Sat, Feb 28, 2026
He wasn't just a man.
He was a system... a force... a law that was never questioned.
His eyes were unreadable, his voice never loud, and his commands... executed without debate.
Everyone feared him.
And I... I was the only one who didn't understand why-until I was caught in his orbit.
He never called me by my name.
He created one only I could hear.
He said it once, with a deadly calm:
"My secret star."
And from that day on...
I never looked at the galaxy the same way again.
I wasn't looking for love.
But I found myself in the hands of a man who knew no weakness-
A man who, when he chooses to see you...
You'll never be the same again.
- Lucien D'Arken
- Lyra Carlton
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