A Long Tee Shot to Go
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  • Reads 383
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  • Parts 10
  • Time 2h 1m
Ongoing, First published May 14, 2015
"Noah, why are you still looking at me?" I stared at him with a confused expression. He's been doing this for the last 10 minutes: staring. 
"Because, being the friend that I am, I'm worried about you,"
"Why would you be worried about me?"
He lightly laughed, throwing his head back in the process. "Well for one, you haven't stopped twitching. And two, you have drool down your chin and your eyes look like diamonds. Care to explain?"
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Breanna Jones is a college student trying to juggle school and her starting position on Penn University's softball team as a Pitcher. One thing that makes her different and sets her apart from the rest of the crowd is she has an early stage of a genetic disease that has very little treatment available. 
Her brother, Keegan Jones, is a pro-golfer making millions of dollars every weekend for shooting a better score than anyone else. But he has one thing that distracts her.
His caddy.
As softball winds down and Final testing's are over, Brea flies down to Palm Beach, Florida to watch her little brother play; if she can keep her eyes off of Keegan's caddy. Now, as choices are to be made, Brea must make a decision. Turn away from a life she is comfortable with, or take a chance. It's like hitting a driver on a Par 5; you have to because there is no other option. There is a long tee shot to go.
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