What If

So I decided to make a short Fan fiction for the fault in our stars along time ago but I never did anything with it so here it is.
This was my first time writing fan fiction and I want to know what people think of it so leave a comment .
I'm not going to be one of those authors who post once every month i might not even go beyond part 2 depending on what people tell me what they think of my story and give me feedback on how to make it way better than it is.