To Autumn
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Complete Sun, Jan 27, 20135m
My GCSE controlled assessment for creative transformational writing (I changed a few bits). Put it on here to get some feedback, I'm considering writing as a career :) It's only a short story, but I'm considering using it in a story that I'm planning on writing. Please read and criticize (I LOVE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!), and tell me what you think :D
Thanks a bunch!! :) xx
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