Elements: The Beginning
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  • Reads 893
  • Votes 148
  • Parts 30
  • Time 3h 57m
Ongoing, First published May 14, 2015
Four teenagers lives are suddenly changed when a mysterious phenomenon causes them to gain the powers of the elements.

As they try to understand what is happening to them, all sorts of questions arise: What are they going to do? Who can they trust? What does the world expect from them? 

Secrets are revealed and facts are hidden. 

There's one lesson these four teenagers have received and that is...nothing is what it seems.


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