My Notes on Ray
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Last published Wed, Aug 20, 2025
A local doctor kept notes on one of his patients for 16 years. Ray was ten when they met. Underweight, observant, sat next to his violin. Nothing was ever clearly wrong. And yet, the doctor kept writing.
- A novella from our Qurious Quill (@Qoltov) series.
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