Mysterious

Hello, I am Amelia Lark, and why I am talking to you is because I have a story to tell you. A very mysterious story, that is. What you are about to read is going to surprise you, and make you very anxious to hear more each page, so here's what I have to tell.
Long ways from Earth,out from our galaxy, there is an unknown planet called Zeighloon. All the people on the planet are animated and have permanent dark, black lines under their eyes. And there is one twist to both Earth and Zeighloon: the people on both planets have exact twins, with very minimal changes.One day, without suspiciousness, a criminal from Zeighloon escaped from a high-security prison, known primarily as the Black Hole, and went off to get revenge on the planet. He recruited thousands of different aliens for an army, and it was far more than Zeighloon International's military could defeat. Veightloon, the teenager who escaped Black Hole Prison, took over the planet.
He noticed one particular family, in which he wanted to get revenge on, was gone. The reason for his need for revenge was, in that family, he had a previous relationship with one of the girls. She found out about his criminal acts, so she broke up with him and turned him in. After finding out about this, Veightloon found out everyone still had their tracking chips in them. So he had his two best soldiers to go down to Earth to find the family and bring them back alive. The two soldiers went down to to Earth disguised as a loved boy band, took their place, and waited for her to come.