Stonetalon Academy

Stonetalon Academy

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In this world of magic, sixteen-year-old Kevin Miller is visited by his future self from an alternate world, who has traveled back in time and crossed worlds to help him avert tragedy with the best friend he thought he lost in a massacre as a child. This is part one of the story of how Kevin and Zoey fall in love, and how he sacrifices everything to keep her alive. 103k words. I'd love feedback. Please tell me what you think works and what doesn't, but definitely tell me what you do like! If you at least like the interactions between Kevin and Julia, I will be very motivated to change the story until it's more compelling and engaging. I have ideas, and I have several books mapped out that will generally be unaffected by changes to anything except the two main characters!
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I wrote this when I was about 13, A LOT of it doesn't make sense. Check out my other works that are a lot better. Sophia Miller is your average 17 year old. She has her life planned out for her go to college, get married, and have a family. Well she did have a plan. Until one wild night with her neighbor. Who everyone thinks is the biggest jock and has no plans after high school. Sophia finds herself as 17 year old pregnant senior. Her plans or destroyed. She has nothing left her college plans are ruined and her parents hate her. How will her neighbor react when she tries to hide and doesn't tell him the kid is his? How will her picture perfect parents react?

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