Stonetalon Academy

Stonetalon Academy

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In this world of magic, sixteen-year-old Kevin Miller is visited by his future self from an alternate world, who has traveled back in time and crossed worlds to help him avert tragedy with the best friend he thought he lost in a massacre as a child. This is part one of the story of how Kevin and Zoey fall in love, and how he sacrifices everything to keep her alive. 103k words. I'd love feedback. Please tell me what you think works and what doesn't, but definitely tell me what you do like! If you at least like the interactions between Kevin and Julia, I will be very motivated to change the story until it's more compelling and engaging. I have ideas, and I have several books mapped out that will generally be unaffected by changes to anything except the two main characters!
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(Highest rank- #1 in Fantasy) ***FEATURED*** ~2nd Place in The Bright Book Awards~ ~3rd Place in The Writers Awards~ ~The Royalty Awards Honourable Mention~ ~The whirlwind bookmakers awards honourable mention~ " Another world?" " Why did you hide such a big secret from me, grandma?" Callidora Flinn, 18, has no idea what her life holds for her ahead. Moved from New York to San Francisco, in an unknown city, she meets Evanthia Clarke who becomes her best friend and her soul sister to guide her through the hardest of moments or laugh with her to the funniest of them. Soon they discover a truth that changes their life forever. They find a portal to another dimension, another world, where beauty lies everywhere until the unruly apprentice Alaric wins its throne. Her pendants with special powers pull the soul sisters to a thrilling but dangerous task of defeating Alaric. Wicked Alaric is after them in order to fulfil his selfish desires. The soul sisters put in their best efforts to defeat him. Is their victory assured? Will they succeed in remaining united throughout the struggle or will they be separated forever? Will companions or more have to sacrifice their lives while protecting them or will the soul sisters be able to save them on time? *** #770 out of 1.4 K in world (15/06/2018) #30 in Fantasy ( 31/12/18) No plagiarism involved. Any sort of similarity with a book is coincidental. Copy rights - All Rights Reserved. Copying any content of this book is a punishable offense...

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