Stonetalon Academy

Stonetalon Academy

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In this world of magic, sixteen-year-old Kevin Miller is visited by his future self from an alternate world, who has traveled back in time and crossed worlds to help him avert tragedy with the best friend he thought he lost in a massacre as a child. This is part one of the story of how Kevin and Zoey fall in love, and how he sacrifices everything to keep her alive. 103k words. I'd love feedback. Please tell me what you think works and what doesn't, but definitely tell me what you do like! If you at least like the interactions between Kevin and Julia, I will be very motivated to change the story until it's more compelling and engaging. I have ideas, and I have several books mapped out that will generally be unaffected by changes to anything except the two main characters!
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Ice flooded my veins as the realization of who he was hit me. It must have been evident on my face because the man in front of me let out a dark laugh. "Oh dear, you didn't realize you were talking to a royal, did you darling?" he crooned. Not just any royal. Kesserian Cinis. The recently coronated king and ruler over the Ember Court. I forgot how to breathe, my mind whirring as it tried to figure out how I could have been so stupid as to let this happen. *************************************************** Wren Heatherfield is on the run. Having turned 18, she is now in danger of becoming selected for the Garner, a deadly game in which the six kings who rule over her continent take eighteen non-magical girls and make them fight for their lives. But as she tries to avoid the game by running away with her best friend and her sister, she consequently finds herself doomed to be a competitor in the 246th Garner. But the Garner isn't the only thing capable of killing her. In a castle surrounded by kings with dark powers and girls fighting for their lives, she may find that the politics of royalty can be just as deadly as their games. No one can be trusted in a palace full of monsters and, if Wren has any hopes of survival, she may have to become one herself.

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