Solitude of Dune

DISCLAIMER : trigger warning for gr@pe in part 4 (it is not bcs I'm insane tho that's debatable but I did this scene to really show how inhumane the harkonnens are that they are beyond evil I am not a creep who enjoys these things do not get me wrong)

Note: this is still in work and I've only written 40 pages. I'll try to be consistent but I have to say I'm not and writers block occurs often, the description is detailed way past what I've written, that's bcs I've thought all the main plot out and need to write it. I'm trying my best to make it feel like a dune book whilst reading, but I am 14 and have no idea how to write philosophy, phycology and politics so I'm doing my best Welp.

This is a story taking place right after the end of Dune 2 (events based on the movie ending, not the book). This fanfiction gives light to the ignored main characters of the story, specifically the women (Chani, Irulan and Lady Fenring) and focuses on the event leading to messiah. I started this fanfiction out of pure spite and annoyance to the people who said 'omg chani left she's not coming back she's gonna be the villain in Dune 3'. No, Paul said he saw her come back and what Paul sees in the future is an absolute, so I made this with a goal in mind to show how Chani's return could be made, and this is just one form of many. Additionally I found it interesting to write about restoring house Harkonnen and the Bene Gesserit plotting against Paul to begin. Bless the maker and his waters, bless the coming and going of him.