The Song That Made Her Stay
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Madeline has always loathed Jeremiah, a fact well-known among her friends and her boyfriend, Max. But one fateful day in music class, a duet changes everything...
Paired with Jeremiah, Madeline hears him play a song on his acoustic guitar, and suddenly, she's not just listening - she's entranced. Hypnotised by the melody, she finds herself irrevocably in love with him, tethered to his side.
Her friends, noticing the drastic change, soon fall under the same spell, their obsession for Jeremiah growing with each passing day. But he only has eyes for Madeline, leaving a trail of infatuated girls in his wake.
Heartbroken and enraged, Max watches as the girls around him succumb to Jeremiah's hypnotic charm - he was no longer the adored football star. With his friends struggling to keep him grounded, they all must unravel the mystery behind the song and the strange hold Jeremiah has over the girls before it's too late.
Will Madeline realise the truth? Or will she have her entire future with Jeremiah planned out?
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