Unbalanced, Unrequited
- Reads 14
- Votes 0
- Parts 1
Ongoing<5 mins
Last published Fri, May 15, 2015
Madelynn DeVeau was labelled the most amazing 17 year old girl in the minds of anyone who got close. I guess you could say she was that girl, one who "has everything".. or had. She was simple. She lived for the love of music and her faith. When the only person she has ever truly loved becomes fickle, she knew that her dangerous prayer was starting to be answered. As testing turned her life a 180 degree spin, she struggles to keep faith, hope, love. Can she manage to protect the ones she loves from her biggest secret? Or will she become selfish?
The creaking of the back and forth of an old swing set urged a word of speech with every squeaky sound. She slowly grabs her right hand into her left, trying to ease the trembling caused by the deafening silence of an empty playground on a beautifully, disastrous July night. Never would she have seen this coming. Never could she have ever foreseen a freezing darkness on a 28 degree summer month. The courage building from the desperate depravity of their relationship pushed her words. She had nothing left to lose.
All Rights Reserved
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
FATAL ATTRACTION
I'm just a baby writer, so please be kind to me! 😆 Even if you don't comment or vote, please at least view the story. It would mean the world to me! So thanks for your support, and here's hoping you enjoy my writing! 🤗 Just so you know, this story is focused on school life, so there aren't a ton of characters. It's a simple story, Despite her plus-size figure, Faith had big dreams of becoming a singer and model. She believed that her voice was beautiful and that it could capture anyone's heart, including the boy she had been crushing on for two years. But no matter how hard she tried, he never seemed to notice her. Instead, he manipulated her by using her talent for his own gain and then left her behind. Feeling betrayed and heartbroken, Faith withdrew from school, unsure of what to do next. The humiliation and insults were too much for Faith to bear. As she struggled to recover from the betrayal, she swore to herself that she would have her revenge. Determined to reinvent herself, she underwent surgery to change her appearance and began plotting how to get back at her former crush. As she carried out her plan, she couldn't help but wonder if her feelings for him were still there. And what if he still hated her? Would she regret her decision to change herself? Or would they somehow find a way to be together again? © All Right ReservedComplete
My Unknown Love | B.E.
**A Billie Eilish Story** Madelynn had finally come to terms with her love for Billie, who had seemingly abandoned her and whom she believed harbored a strong hatred toward her. This was puzzling, as Madelynn and Billie used to be best friends. Though Madelyn was afraid to admit it, she had always been in love with Billie. Billie had pushed Madelynn out of her life unexpectedly, with no warning or explanation. Of course, the situation was more complicated than it appeared, as there was more to Billie's story. Billie was in love as well, but she didn't want to accept it, let alone confront it. For Billie, it was difficult even to see Madelynn at school or in public. Whenever she caught a glimpse of her, she was reminded of how suddenly she had let Madelynn go and how her actions had affected her. Started: April 12, 2023 🥇#billieeilishfanfic November 14, 2025 Mature content. Grammarly was used in the writing process. I hope you enjoy it!
An Unthinkable and Unimaginable Love
Sometimes your better half is right next to you... 17 year old Kristyn is catching hell from every direction! She had to find love somewhere. Overlooking it for so long, she finally finds out the "Man of her dreams" was right next to her. With things as complicated as they are. How will this relationship work?Complete
Into the Velvet
*EDITORS' CHOICE 2021*After falling for her senior year teacher, Louise learns a harsh lesson on what adulthood isn't. Louise has some trauma to unpack. Heartbreak's a bitch, and her first relationship had been anything but normal. Thinking herself mature for her age, her affair with Mr. Cain started swooningly well. Except things ended quite abruptly. It's a lot for a seventeen year old to handle. But who's really at fault for what happened? Who even is Mr. Cain, and what is he hiding? From the wreckage of her naivety and self-esteem, can Louise save her friendships and rebuild herself? Our love songs aren't telling the whole truth. How can this be? In this tale of vulnerability, adolescence and painful reckoning, the arrogance of youth demands a price. * "'You're what, Louise?' he asked. 'You're sorry? What am I supposed to do here? How can I turn this around? How can I tell you that everything you want and feel is reciprocated, when I have to go back to work and pretend none of it happened?' 'I don't know the answer!' I cried. 'Neither of us do.' I threw my hands up in defeat. He caught them before they could fall. 'But how do I go back to living without your words?' His voice became a whisper. He squeezed my fingers tightly, closing his eyes and bringing them to his chest. 'I need how you make me feel, Luiza. I need it to feel alive. I won't stay away. No one's made me feel this good before. And I can't stand myself for wanting what I want. What do I do?' I was a violin bow on the verge of splintering. Every inch of me pulsed with an ache that began from the marrow of my bones. Fate had brought us here. At this crossroads of ours, there were a hundred different choices to make. A thousand different lifetimes to choose from, stemming from and decided entirely by my next choice. And in the end, I chose incorrectly. I held his face between my hands, feeling the echoing pulse of his skin. I brought his face to mine. I kissed him."Complete
Morose ✔️
When you experience the worst thing you could ever imagine, how do you react? - "The water looked so tempting under me as I stood there in the dark. The splashing sounds as the waves hit the stone calmed me down and I took a deep breath. Yes. This was it. I closed my eyes and took one step closer, feeling the curb under the soles of my shoes when I stopped again. Then my heart started pounding when I heard the sound of an angry engine behind me, a screech and a crash. I turned around, gasping, ready to pick my phone up from the ground to call for help- but what met me was a pair of soul-searching golden eyes. In all his twisted glory, he stood in front of me, his precious motorcycle's engine still going as it laid on the ground behind him. His hand reached out, as if asking me to wait, but neither of us said anything. We just stood there." - Olivia was a happy, cheerful girl whose life turned upside down one evening, over a phone call. Her mind turned dark, her thoughts became intrusive, and she became... morose. One night everything seemed to fall apart and she found herself at the river banks when an old friend found her and refused to let her go. That night kickstarted something in her that made her want to change... for him. Helix was a misunderstood man surrounded by dark rumors. People feared him. Everyone stayed away from him.. Except Olivia. Olivia's life is in danger; can she fight her way out of the black hole before it's too late? ⚠️ Mature audiences only TW: includes adult themes such as suicide, sexuality, alcohol and other mental health-related issues - viewer discretion is advisedComplete
Caught In His World
Madelyn Norlyse. Brown hair with matching brown eyes and a soul that's absolutely lifeless. Dull. Empty. She has been abused and used so many times that she lost count. She doesn't let anyone in easily and trusts almost nobody. She was left for dead, her soul unresponsive and almost annihilated by pain and anguish. Her only joy is her one best friend... that all changes when Dylan Romano comes along. He teaches her to live and she gives him life. -----Extract----- I start to hyperventilate waiting for him to speak. I wasn't allowed to speak without them wanting me too. "Do you know how worried your mother has been?" he asked calmly. I didn't like it when he was calm. He would become angry afterwards. "I asked you a question girl" he stated now looking at me. His eyes were bloodshot. I could tell he was drunk. He forever is. "I didn't mean to upset you or her" i responded as apologetically as i could. My voice was shakey. "where did you go?" he stood up. "Where did you go that was so important you had to break the rules of this home" he was walking closer to me. -----End Of Extract----- My book is written in parts.This is my first time writing my very own story, so if there are any mistakes I'm deeply sorry. Overall, I hope you enjoy! ⚠️Trigger Warning: assault, abuse, violence, graphic details and suicide attempts ⚠️Complete
Her Conscience
Star is a different type of girl. Ever since she got detached from her divorced, emotionally unavailable parents, she's been filling up her quiet, lonely world with music and dancing. She's practically a musical prodigy at 16 and music can't possibly be taken away from her. The only people she's ever been really close to are her psycho, over enthusiastic bff's. They're the only people she can tolerate anyway. That's until one fateful day when she meets a cocky, narcissistic, though really cute guy at her favourite fro yo shop who gets under her skin for just being himself. She absolutely detests guys like him. Absolutely gorgeous, frustratingly charming, cocky as hell and shockingly talented at music. That's right. Star discovers that this seemingly unbearable guy loves music almost as much as she does and just that single fact makes her heart soften a little so she lets her guard down for just a tiny bit. But after that one moment that she decides to let it down, she realises that she can't get it back up again. She discovers she can actually feel things and once she acknowledges this, her whole world is completely changed from the quiet, peaceful, drama free life she has always been used to into a series of drama, heartbreak, tears, broken trusts and friendships. |Featured X1| @romance(high school romance)Complete
Broken Until You
[COMPLETED] Autumn Cross is now in 12th grade at her new school, Willington High, with only one goal in mind: passing the 12th grade and going to a good college. But her world changes when she meets Ryder Becker. Ryder Becker is one of the most popular boys in all of Willington High. I mean, all the boys want to be him and all the girls worship him. He could care less about grades because he knows that football is what's going to get him into a good college. But his carelessness in grades changes when he meets Autumn. Not only does Autumn get partnered up with Ryder for the biggest class project of the whole year, she also lives on the same street as him. In the beginning she thinks it's a total curse, but maybe it's a blessing in disguise... They both may pretend on the outside that they are fine, but truth be told, they are both broken. The way his smile doesn't match his sad eyes draws her towards him, and the scars and bruises on her skin draw him towards her. A cure for your sadness could be another person, right? Well put her broken pieces together with his, and you have cracked the code. Love could put their broken pieces back together. ----------------------------------- A sky full of stars and he was still staring at me. "Why are you staring like that?" I asked him. "You scare me, Autumn." Ryder admitted. "How come?" He looked down at the grass beneath us then back at me and gulped. "Because I want to tell you secrets I'm too scared to admit to myself." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 🤍I wrote this when I was around 13-14 (i'm 19 now) so some chapters may be cringy but I am too lazy to rewrite them, and still so many people enjoy this book and i'm truly grateful! But sorry in advance for scenes that may seem unrealistically cringe...I was young and naive. But anyways,enjoy the book (hoping to write more books in the future)🤍 Highest rank: 2019 #1 scars 03/12 #7 love 04/30 #4 romance 06/07 #1 highschool 06/07 #5 teen fiction 06/09 #1 cute 06/15 #1 loversComplete
Everything Changes
Aria had a simple life, she had her friends, her brother, and her parents. At the time she thought life couldn't get any better; minus the guy she was in love with was having a hard time noticing she's the one. But when tragedy strikes, she doesn't know how to deal with it. Losing someone close to her and the guilt that eats away at her heart. How do you deal with it? The life she had known was gone. The pain feels like drowning. Though putting your life together is hard when you keep finding out people aren't who they say they are. Who could possibly help her keep her head above water? Someone she least expected? Could he be the one to save her, before it all becomes too much? Ryder didn't leave much falsehood to rumors. A complete playboy. He didn't have much he cared about in life anymore, at least, other than his friends. They were the only ones who knew his dark secrets, the mystery that hid in his eyes. That's the way he liked it, usually keeping to himself, not giving a shit what anyone thought about him. When Aria walks in his life, things get shaken up. Now, life starts getting a little more interesting.Complete
In Another Life
Amlyne had been fighting the feelings she felt for Jeffrey Alan or Jeff for 10 years. They met when she was 11 and he was 14. He had moved from Vermont to South Carolina. He was a chubby boy who wanted nothing more than to race cars. She was a be-speckled, mousy 11 year old who just tried to stay out of the way of bullies. The day they met something happened. They became as close as brother and sister. They ran and played, climbed trees, worked on cars, and read Race Car magazines. She looked up to him as the brother she never had. She taught him how to be a redneck Southerner and he taught her how to take care of herself. As time went by the feelings of friendship became more. For a while, it was difficult to be friends. JP got a little too into the Redneck life. He let people lead him down a dark path that Amlyne could not help him out of, or so she thought. He ran with a rough crowd that scared Amlyne. She not only had to fight her own feelings but also had to fight with her parents. They did not approve of JP. They saw him as bad influence and dangerous. So while Amlyne was still under 18, she had to do as she was told. All that was soon to change.Complete
I'm just a baby writer, so please be kind to me! 😆 Even if you don't comment or vote, please at least view the story. It would mean the world to me! So thanks for your support, and here's hoping you enjoy my writing! 🤗 Just so you know, this story is focused on school life, so there aren't a ton of characters. It's a simple story, Despite her plus-size figure, Faith had big dreams of becoming a singer and model. She believed that her voice was beautiful and that it could capture anyone's heart, including the boy she had been crushing on for two years. But no matter how hard she tried, he never seemed to notice her. Instead, he manipulated her by using her talent for his own gain and then left her behind. Feeling betrayed and heartbroken, Faith withdrew from school, unsure of what to do next. The humiliation and insults were too much for Faith to bear. As she struggled to recover from the betrayal, she swore to herself that she would have her revenge. Determined to reinvent herself, she underwent surgery to change her appearance and began plotting how to get back at her former crush. As she carried out her plan, she couldn't help but wonder if her feelings for him were still there. And what if he still hated her? Would she regret her decision to change herself? Or would they somehow find a way to be together again? © All Right Reserved
More detailsContent Guidelines