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Critique This (I made this since uhh, 8)

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I found this deep into my files and decided to post it! (There was more chapters to it but I can't find any.)

feel free to critique it! I like the opinions and suggestions to make it better!

(It's actually an original novel I was working on a few years ago but stopped due to writers block! BTW. This is not related to any of my other books- well, I don't have another book just the WLC one but yk heh?)

Have fun! :&gt;All Rights Reserved

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Heirs Of Nothing

Born into a legacy of power, pride, and politics, twins Zarmina and Zain Khanzada never asked for a kingdom they weren't welcome in. With four much older brothers who were heirs to everything-from feudal titles to family devotion-their unexpected arrival brought not celebration, but shame. Hidden from the world, denied by their own mother, and resented by the very blood meant to protect them, they were ghosts in a palace that never wanted them. But what happens when the forgotten grow up quietly-wise, observant, and dangerously different? Raised by the one woman who saw their worth, Esra Khanzada, a divorced artist with fire in her veins and wounds of her own, the twins become something the Khanzada clan never prepared for: A rebellion with royal blood. A story of belonging, soft strength, and silent storms-The Heirs of Nothing isn't just about the children no one wanted. It's about what happens when those children decide not to need anyone at all.