Undone
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MatureOngoing14m
Last published Sat, Aug 2, 2025
'She didn't mean to want more. She just didn't know how not to.'
She thought the burn of sweat and smoke was enough to shield her from the look in his eyes, hard and unreadable. Every drill, every mistake, every extra push-up felt like it was designed to break her. But she didn't flinch. She told herself she wouldn't cry. She pushed herself, even when it hurt. She stayed.
She told herself it was about proving something. But when she closed her eyes at night, her body remembered something else. The dream she couldn't remember- but the feel of a mouth on her skin, his breath in her ear, and the way he finally looked at her.
And now, he did look. Not with kindness. Not with hate.
But Something else.
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