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Last published Tue, Oct 21, 2025
This is a pitch for my story, Berzucres Virus. I ask for advice on how to make it better. The story is about an autistic faun whose sister has her lifespan taken away, and he goes on a journey to help her become a faun again. The story tackles themes of ableism towards disabled people, racism, and the struggles of any gender.
The story involves Ainu culture, Warlpiri culture, Japanese culture, geisha culture, autistic people, LGBTQIA+, etc. If you find anything uncomfortable about this, feel free to bring it to my attention so that I can fix it.
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