Secrets At Blackwell Manor
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One chapter from my novel idea and would love some feedback if possible!!
starts in media res so there's no context but that's sort of the point...
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Its not that long so would greatly appreciate it for you to take some time to read it! Hopefully should enjoy nonetheless.
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