How I would Rewrite Derision - A Miraculous Ladybug REWRITE.

(There are themes of homophobia, bullying, and mental health themes. I mean to note, I am not homophobic in the slightest - I apologise to anyone who feels uncomfortable about this)

Even though "Derision" aired over a year ago, I, like much of the fanbase, disliked it because it seemed solely created to give Marinette "trauma." It felt like a weak excuse to downplay Marinette's stalking while unfairly assassinating Kim's character. That's why I decided to rewrite this episode to focus entirely on Lê Chiến Kim Ature, commonly known as Kim. To do this, I researched the Miraculous Ladybug Wiki Fandom to create a solid plotline for the episode. That's when I discovered that Kim was adopted and has two dads-Mr. Lê and Mr. Ature. I thought this would be a great way to add more depth to Kim's character instead of keeping him as the stereotypical dumb jock. I hope you enjoy it, and constructive criticism is welcome. So without further ado, here's the rewrite!