This is basically just a rewrite of the OG story that I made because I saw there was a BUNCH of things wrong with the original one in terms of its structure and pacing and characters so WELCOME TO THE NEW STORY, its going to keep to the original as well as spice things up from it
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I am remaking this story it will have the same characters and same plot, but it'll be different. So please head on forward to my new account @warriorbreeze if you wanna read the redo one!