Whispers of a Broken Promise

Whispers of a Broken Promise

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This poem expresses the quiet sorrow of waiting for someone who once promised to stay but has now drifted away. It begins with the passage of time and the weight of unspoken emotions, as tears mark the silent ache of longing. The speaker clings to the hope of a reply to their last message, holding onto the belief that it will come, despite the growing emptiness. Memories of last year's closeness, marked by a tender pinky promise, stand in sharp contrast to the present solitude. The silence now feels heavy, filled with unkept promises and quiet goodbyes. The closing lines reveal an inner conflict - the heart still yearning for a reunion, while the mind pleads for release from thoughts of the one who left - capturing the bittersweet struggle between hope and acceptance.
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It all started with a confession. They vowed to love each other for the rest of their lives. To be with each other's side through thick and thin. They will be each other's happiness and strength. They will be the best couple to ever live on Earth. A sweet promise of a four year old lad to his mother's friend daughter. But many years had past. They grew up. They met a lot of people. They got mature. They become strangers. Where did their sweet promise to love each other forever go? Was it buried in the past already? How? How did they end up as strangers? That was her question.

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