Whispers of a Broken Promise

Whispers of a Broken Promise

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This poem expresses the quiet sorrow of waiting for someone who once promised to stay but has now drifted away. It begins with the passage of time and the weight of unspoken emotions, as tears mark the silent ache of longing. The speaker clings to the hope of a reply to their last message, holding onto the belief that it will come, despite the growing emptiness. Memories of last year's closeness, marked by a tender pinky promise, stand in sharp contrast to the present solitude. The silence now feels heavy, filled with unkept promises and quiet goodbyes. The closing lines reveal an inner conflict - the heart still yearning for a reunion, while the mind pleads for release from thoughts of the one who left - capturing the bittersweet struggle between hope and acceptance.
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Completed✓ 'The price for love is pain,' how ironic of life isn't it. Loneliness hurts and so does loving. Loving shatters you heart and leaves you bleeding. So here's a thing with broken hearts, they never fit quiet like they did before. Like they say, you can glue a plate together but it will never look the same again. But what do you do when you've been broken and shattered not just your heart but your soul too. Where do you go from there. And let me let you, one of the hardest decision about love is deciding to let go or try, just one last time. I'll be okay, that's what he wanted to hear. Copyright reserved© Warning ⚠warning ⚠warning⚠ A lot of sexual nature in this short story

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