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Clara is done with dating apps and their endless parade of men holding fish. Jaded and bored, she just wants a love story like the ones she reads online-the kind with a brooding, possessive hero who would burn the world down for her.
In a moment of culinary desperation, a misread recipe for "Devil's Food Cupcakes" and an accidental pinch of cinnamon instead of brimstone summoned...Zane.
He's perfect. Too perfect. Tall, dark, and devastatingly handsome, he's less a creature from Hell and more a hero ripped from the pages of a five-star webnovel. He sweeps Clara into a flawless romance, hitting every beat with uncanny precision.
He is the perfect Demon Boyfriend from Hell!
Or... is he?
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One minute I was battling a math exam, the next I was committing a major cafeteria food crime against a guy who radiated the kind of effortless cool that screamed 'trouble' with a capital 'T'. Zane Radcliffe. That name alone felt like a dare. Our first meeting? Let's just say it involved a chocolate biscuit, still stubbornly encased in its plastic wrapper, my moment of sheer panic, and his utterly unfazed smirk. Who knew that a flying, plastic-clad pastry could be the start of everything? My life was already complicated enough, filled with unspoken expectations and a future that felt more like a blueprint than a blank page. Then Zane walked in - or rather, had a biscuit, wrapper and all, thrown at his face - and suddenly, everything felt deliciously unpredictable. This is the story of how a badass, a biscuit in plastic, and a whole lot of unexpected twists turned my world upside down. Trust me, you won't see what's coming. *Photos not mine. Credit to owner.*
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