Bad intuition

Bad intuition

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"You are meant for this. You've been built for it. Through every ounce of pain, every moment of disgust you've endured since setting foot in this forsaken city... You are now ready to take on these criminal monarchs." Those were the words Johan heard on a cold night, words spoken by a stranger who found him in the middle of rescuing a young girl from a group of dangerous men. The man was no prophet, no holy messenger. He was simply an ordinary figure who saw something in Johan: a body moving with precise, instinctive efficiency, as if it had been forged for this very purpose, to protect. Johan was taken aback. What does this guy want? He figured the man was probably drunk. But there was no slur in his speech, no unsteady step. His coat was neat, his gaze steady, his presence oddly deliberate. Still gripping one of the attackers by the collar, Johan frowned and asked, "What are you even talking about, my dude?" The man only shrugged, turned to leave, and tossed his final words into the night air: "There's a fire in this city. Extinguish it." This is an original work of fiction, written purely for fun and imagination.
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( rewrite ) Huntingtown was panicking; no one knew where the sirens were coming from. There was no electricity, and there was no way for the storm Sirens to be sounding, yet they were. The entire Town was awake; everyone had a weapon. They had grabbed guns, knives, swords, and bats if they could be wielded and used for self-defense; Renee aimed her rifle at the trees, looking desperately for an explanation. Why would a siren sound? They only sounded when they were in Danger, so where was the Danger? When the predators revealed themselves, that was where the siren noise was coming from. Renee could feel her heart jump into her throat. Her face went pale; they were here. They had found the Town. Terror and panic soon swept Huntingtown; everyone knew what those monsters could do. After all, they conquered the planet and imposed the "choosing." Huntingtown was created hoping that its isolation in a cold climate would keep the Predators away, but it didn't. A voice came over those speakers. A male voice Gruff and laced with a growl. It was almost as if whoever was speaking was annoyed and angry. "Although I have enjoyed seeing your little Town outmaneuver many hunters. I am afraid this is where your little games end. However, I will give you a chance to keep your freedom. A hunt. Your best hunter, Renee Madison, will lead you." Renee felt her blood go cold as she stared wide-eyed at the ship. She was unknowingly dropping her gun at the news. " she will be your leader; she will be my prize. You have a time advantage. Go!" The ship took off, looking for a place to land, all while the news sank into the Town's residence. Renee had known she had fucked up when she fired at one of those predators and hit him. She had proven herself worthy of the hunt. Now she has to face the consequences, and not only her but her entire Town has to. Renee had to win this hunt; the fate of her Town depended on it.

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