judwaa- The rewrite
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I recently watched the Pakistani drama Judwaa. Though I enjoyed everything about it-the twists, the characters, and the emotions-I couldn't help but feel unsatisfied with the ending. Deep inside, I wanted Sara and Sarmad to end up together, because their bond always felt unfinished to me. So, I decided to rewrite the story in my own perspective.
This version is not an exact copy of the original drama, but rather my personal reimagining of it. The characters remain the same, yet the paths I create for them will be different-ones that lead Sara and Sarmad towards each other, in the way I always hoped.
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