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When Love Crashed In
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  • Reads 9,748
  • Votes 619
  • Parts 31
  • Time 8h 13m
Ongoing, First published Aug 17
11 new parts
Freen was supposed to confess.
Becky was supposed to be hers.

But one unexpected "yes" 
at the wrong time,
in the wrong place,
to the wrong person 
breaks everything, they never admitted out loud.

Now, the air is thick with silence,
the group chat is on fire,
and feelings are building into something
too loud to stay buried.

Secrets. Regret. A countdown neither of them sees coming.
And when love finally crashes in,
it won't be quiet.
It'll be messy,
public,
and impossible to undo.

"Some stories don't begin with a kiss...
They begin with a scream in the middle of someone else's happy ending."
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Freen and Becky have always been inseparable-neighbors, best friends, and the kind of constant that doesn't need words. Becky is always there: saving her a seat, tightening her helmet strap, sharing soup on quiet nights, and flashing the porch light across the yard so Freen never feels alone. But when a new classmate, Heng, starts pulling at Freen's attention, Becky's protectiveness sharpens into something harder to ignore. What looks like simple care begins to feel like something more-something Freen can't quite name, and something Becky refuses to admit. Between library afternoons, balcony talks, and unspoken messages that pass in the dark, Freen begins to realize that not all love is loud. Sometimes it lives in the things left unsaid, the choices made in silence, the line drawn and redrawn between just friends and something else. Because in the end, it's not about coffee, or noodles, or study notes. It's about her. It's always been about her. Because it's you.