I Echo What You Are (Ver 2)
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Last published Thu, Aug 28, 2025
A cute little toxic family of five who's destiny is to go through hell.
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"▆▆▆▆?" I call out, watching her turn to face me. Her blank face I always see in my hallucinations is now painted with quiet fear, her breaths quiet but uneven, the hallway light flickering above her. Her posture is stiff but graceful, her eyes glued onto me as I walk towards her with trembling legs.
"I'm so sorry..!" I sobbed, reaching towards her with hands that couldn't wait to hold her face and pull her close.
My daughter.
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Please read this and make my tiny little squeezed up heart explode.
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