The Curse of Noticing
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Last published Sun, Aug 31, 2025
This is about loving someone and noticing when something changes, even if they don't say it. It's about picking up on the little things, feeling like you're giving your all, and quietly wondering if they still feel the same.
It's not dramatic. It's not loud.
Just that soft ache when love starts to feel one-sided, and you're too afraid to ask if you're right.
If you've ever stayed quiet because you didn't want to seem like too much, this is for you.
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