A Boy Named Mars
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MatureComplete Mon, Oct 20, 20253h 31m
Detective Sey Zur is haunted by two suicides: his wife's, and now his boyfriend's. Convinced the most recent death was a murder, he launches a renegade investigation into a powerful professor who he believes is responsible.
His only ally is Mars, a sharp and wounded man from his grief support group who seems to understand his pain like no one else. Together, they begin piecing together a damning conspiracy.
But as their search for the truth pulls them closer, the line between reality and delusion begins to fray. Sey is forced to confront a terrifying possibility:
What if the only person who believes his theory is a figment of his own broken mind?
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