Personal Rewrite of Control by Tippy446
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Last published Wed, Sep 17, 2025
This is a rewrite of a work by Tippy446 called Control. All the credits go to her, her characters, and her world. Only read this if you've read her stuff before. Consider this fanfiction.
This is entirely spoilers, so I'll assume you've read it if you're reading this. I hated the direction Control took and have decided to try my hand at rewriting them. I am a neurodivergent person and a victim, so how Nik was handled after chapter 39 was extremely upsetting.
This isn't an attack on Tippy or her work. I want to believe it was a case of ignorance/poor direction.
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