Hometown Lake (ENG. VER)
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Last published Mon, Nov 24, 2025
Kris finds himself facing the worst ordeal an eighteen-year-old can face: a tedious night. Overwhelmed by emptiness, all he had was a slice of pie, a dark room, and disturbing thoughts running through his head. But this emptiness was filled by Susie, who cheerfully invited him to the lake. He felt motivated to go, and finally, he had some energy that night...
⚠️ This is a fanfic for the famous indie game Deltarune, created and produced by the great Toby Fox. Therefore, nothing written or conceived in this fanfic is merely inspired by a work created by a fan for other fans of the same work.
The intention of this fic is not and never will be to rewrite, distort, or demean what Toby Fox created, but rather to show my idealization and interpretation of the work, characters, etc.
❗ This fanfic presents concepts that may be uncomfortable for some readers, such as family problems, abandonment, parental or family issues, etc. If you are sensitive to any of these concepts, I recommend that you do not read it.
🔞 This fanfic presents mature themes written by adults, including profanity, illicit drug use, sexually suggestive content, etc. Read at your own risk.
🇺🇸 This is a translated story, having its original version in Brazilian Portuguese (PT/BR), called "O Lago de Hometown", also created by me.
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