When You Look At Me
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Slow Burn • Ridiculously Devoted MMC
Mani Sharma has one goal: survive work, dodge drama, and avoid falling for Advik Arya-the infuriatingly put-together guy who argues like it's a sport and looks at her like she's the only person in the room.
Too bad fate (and everyone they know) keeps shoving them together.
What begins as harmless banter spirals into late-night confessions, jealous mishaps, domestic disasters, and a love so intense even Mani's stubborn heart can't resist.
Because underneath his calm exterior, Advik is hiding one tiny secret: He's been hers from the start.
Full of sharp banter, soft moments, chaotic chemistry, and a hero who would burn the world before letting her go, When You Look at Me is a swoony, sun-soaked romance about finding the one person who makes everything else disappear.
**Starts slow but picks up after Chapter 3!!!
Safety:
- HEA guaranteed
- No cheating
- Obsessed, devoted MMC
- Both virgins
- Cuteness overload
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