Hidden Love
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  • Time 4h 48m
  • Reads 909
  • Votes 6
  • Parts 29
  • Time 4h 48m
Complete, First published Jan 30, 2013
Mature
"I'm not mad, your dad asked me to help ya'll out with the heavy stuff. Can I come in?" Carlos asked me with the same dry tone. I failed, I nodded and moved to the side so he could get by; as he passed me I smelled his cologne, God he smelled really nice! He turned around to face me then laughed; I was busted! he saw me trying to smell him how emberassing! My cheeks burned, stupid cheeks betrayed me again. "Where are the boxes?" he asked, still laughing at me.
"I don't know figure it out." I told him. I know I gave him an attitude but that only made him laugh more, I turned and walked back to my room. I heard him following me, was he going to fallow me in my own house. "Mom Carlos is here." I told my mom as she came into view. She was on the edge of my bed finishing up the second box.
-If you want to know what happens next read it :D
(MY NOTES: So i want all kinds of comments, good comments and bad. I really want to know if you liked it or just hated it. I want to be able to improve my writing, no I'm not going to stop writing just because you don't like it, i love to write so I'm going to continue my writing. This is unedited so excuse the errors & misspelled words. But i would love to improve it :D with that said here it is. )
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