Hidden Love

Hidden Love

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"I'm not mad, your dad asked me to help ya'll out with the heavy stuff. Can I come in?" Carlos asked me with the same dry tone. I failed, I nodded and moved to the side so he could get by; as he passed me I smelled his cologne, God he smelled really nice! He turned around to face me then laughed; I was busted! he saw me trying to smell him how emberassing! My cheeks burned, stupid cheeks betrayed me again. "Where are the boxes?" he asked, still laughing at me. "I don't know figure it out." I told him. I know I gave him an attitude but that only made him laugh more, I turned and walked back to my room. I heard him following me, was he going to fallow me in my own house. "Mom Carlos is here." I told my mom as she came into view. She was on the edge of my bed finishing up the second box. -If you want to know what happens next read it :D (MY NOTES: So i want all kinds of comments, good comments and bad. I really want to know if you liked it or just hated it. I want to be able to improve my writing, no I'm not going to stop writing just because you don't like it, i love to write so I'm going to continue my writing. This is unedited so excuse the errors & misspelled words. But i would love to improve it :D with that said here it is. )
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Bodyguard to lovers.... BL ~~~~~~ "So... you're saying you've thought about me...before? Like that?!" I say. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I think you'll be better if I uh...If you... if you spent some time out." Father says. I watch as he rubs his hand together repeatedly. "Father I don't understand." I say. "I'm not the right person to explain. I wish your mother was still alive. Boys that get to your age would like to be able to be away from all of this." Father says. "You're sending me away." I say my voice breaking. "No." He replies. "You are!" I say. "It's only for a short while. I don't want you to be away from me." Father says. "I'm not fragile! I can be on my own do things in my own! You're sending me away because you don't want to look at me!" I yell. "Go pack your things if you're not going to have a civil conversation with me." Father says. I scoff and go back inside. I'm hurt and I let myself cry as I pack my belongings. I hear a light tap on my open door. "It's me." I turn and see Yan. "I'll be with you." Yan says. I let him tuck the last few things in my suitcase and latch it closed. "Come on." He says lightly. I follow him down the stairs and past my father. Yan stops me and whispers to me, "Say bye to your father, please." I turn and face my father. "Father." I say plainly. "Be safe." He says. I roll my eyes and follow Yan outside. ~~~~~~

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