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Critical Hit to My Heart
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    Time 31m
Complete, First published Sep 21
Title: "Critical Hit to My Heart"

Plot Overview
	•	Save: Sunshine boy, the friendliest on campus. Known for his smile, helpfulness, and his habit of smacking people on the arm when he laughs or gets embarrassed.
	•	Auau: Competitive, slightly blunt gamer who runs the university's e-sports club. Focused, intense, and not great at reading social cues.
	•	Their worlds collide when a chaotic group project pairs them together. Save's smacking habit randomly makes Auau his "target," which annoys Auau at first but slowly pulls him into Save's orbit.

As they work together, Save drags Auau into more social settings while Auau drags Save into the gaming world. The banter and physical comedy grow into something softer, with a push-and-pull dynamic: Save's sunshine vs. Auau's stormcloud.

Side characters (other e-sports club members, Save's cheerful friend group, maybe a rival gamer) stir things up, either nudging them closer or complicating their dynamic.
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