BETTER LUCK NEXT TIME

BETTER LUCK NEXT TIME

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Mara Evans, a college student, went on a road trip with her girlfriend-Loraine Grimes. She thought it was gonna be normal. But nothing was ever normal. After Mara's girlfriend stopped at a random gas station for a bathroom break and snacks, but she didn't come back. Mara gets out of the car to look for her in the bathroom-her biggest mistake. While looking in the Womens' bathroom, Mara finds an exit leading to a cornfield. She heard wails and screams for help, and Mara followed them. She came across Loraine in a random basement, and gets captured herself. Mara spends days-nights trying to leave the house with her girlfriend-but can she ?
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