Breaking Candor // Eric Coulter
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After Caroline Abbey's parents die under questionable circumstances, all she wants is to find a place where she can belong again. The Aptitude Test is supposed to give her just that. But when her results come back inconclusive, she is forced to make a choice.
Her decision brings her to Dauntless, where a certain blue-eyed leader seems to have seen through her from the very first day.
But why hasn't he revealed her secret? And could he somehow be connected to her parents' murder?
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Side Note: Some parts of this story will follow the movie/book, but as it progresses, original elements will be added. I've also adjusted the initiates' ages to 18, while Tobias/Four and Eric will be 24, as in the movie adaptation.
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