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THE BAPTISED HYPOCRITE
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Ongoing, First published Oct 09, 2025
Mature
I was baptised three times - but no amount of water could wash away my confusion, my guilt, or my pain.

Born in Kisii, raised with dreams of greatness, I thought life was simple: study hard, pray harder, and success would follow. But life had other plans.

The Baptised Hypocrite is my true story - a raw journey through faith and failure, love and lust, poverty and pride.

From innocent childhood days to high school drama and campus temptations, I faced sexual sin, love triangles, betrayal, and spiritual battles that nearly broke me. Then came financial struggles, family expectations, fake friends, and a failed chase for quick success through forex trading and false hope.

I've been judged, rejected, and misunderstood - by others and by myself. I've sinned in secret while standing in church, fallen in love where I should have walked away, and lost everything trying to prove I was worth something.

But this story isn't just about failure - it's about survival and grace.

Because when the dream died, something else was born - truth.

The Baptised Hypocrite is a confession, a warning, and a testimony. It's the story of a young man who faced witches, women, and the weight of his own mistakes - and still found the courage to believe again.

This is not fiction.
This is my life.

My scars. My sins. My salvation.

I am The Baptised Hypocrite.
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Letter for you (Book I)

31 parts Complete Mature

I never told her. Not because I didn't love her, I did. But because I didn't know how to say it without ruining everything we already were. So I loved her in quiet ways. The way I looked at her when she wasn't watching. Through the smiles that said more than my mouth ever could. Through the photos I took of her-little moments of beauty she never saw in herself. On the back of each picture, I wrote her a note. A thought. A memory. A truth I was too scared to speak aloud. Then she left. One accident. One plane ticket. Five years of silence and I waited. I waited because some people only happen to you once. I thought when she came back, maybe we'd have another chance. But fate doesn't care about hope. When she returned, it was with an arranged marriage to Nathan. My best friend. A good man. One I couldn't bring myself to hate. Nathan said the words I never could. I was ready to stay silent again-until I saw her eyes. And so I gave her the pictures. Not words. Not a speech. Just memories. And on the back, a quiet confession I'd written for no one but her. This isn't the story of who got her. It's about the one who never found the words. Unspoken feelings. The one who collects memories but never tries to say the words. This is the story of Carl Salvador. Book I: Letter For You Book II: I love you in every unspoken way Book III: Life after lifetime