"When I First Noticed Den"
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Ongoing28m
Last published Sat, Oct 11, 2025
It all started with one small moment.
He was just acting at the back of the classroom that day - and I didn't even know his name yet.
But something about his voice, his smile, and how confident he looked made me ask my friends, "Kinsa na siya?"
That's how I first noticed Den.
And from that moment on, everything slowly changed.
He started noticing me too. He'd tease me, call me "kiss ko b," send videos of him singing, and sometimes even voice messages - the one where he sang "Malay Ko" by Daniel Padilla still plays in my head.
I thought it was something real. I thought maybe, just maybe, he felt it too.
But when I started to care more, he started to fade away.
Until one day... he just stopped. No explanation. No goodbye. Just silence.
This is a story of a girl who fell too deeply,
of messages that turned into memories,
and of learning that sometimes, the person who makes you smile
can also be the reason you learn how to let go.
"He was never mine, but it still hurt losing him."
A story by Shaun - inspired by a love that almost happened, but never truly stayed. 💔🌸
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