Siege On Castle Kirby: Absolute

A long time ago, we got an assignment in Creative Writing class to write a novel in a month.
... Nobody finished, of course.
But this is my W.I.P. novel, based on the Kirby franchise. It's a series of stories, each one (usually) in a different point of view. All the characters are humanized, and all the villains are living in one castle, known as Castle Devlin. All the good guys are living in another castle, known as Castle Kirby. The novel takes place at Castle Devlin, and ranges from back-stories about characters to telling about their daily lives; but no matter what, it's all about hardships. Hopefully you'll end up with a favorite character! (that will probably end up dying ahem) There are more stories that have already been created that I'll post once I stop being a big procrastinating bag of lazy.
Update: I have decided that this will be a series! I'd be excited if I were you. :3
Well, why am I still talking? ... Er, typing? On to the story!
(also, there might be a typo or two somewhere in there, so please let me know if you find them!
only just now realized I forgot to take down the link to my old cover. *facepalm*)