Like so many others, I was not happy with the way Allegiant ended. I thought Veronica Roth did a beautiful job of writing Tobias's perspective after Tris's death, but I felt like her death was meaningless because it could have been avoided. Having her die because she forgot her gun in the hallway was an insult to her character. Tris was way too smart for that. I needed their happy ending as well as one that did the characters justice.
(I don't own any of the characters or the story. All the credit goes to Veronica Roth )
this is what I think would have happened if tris would have lived. I hope you like it. I've read alot of stories but I want to try my own. Any feedback is wanted.
ENJOY!
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warning Allegiant spoilers.
fan fiction