The Mistake (01)
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In the logical world of CORP, your name is a number and your life is a function. Humanity is the ultimate flaw to be corrected, and all flaws are erased.
Elliot, a five-year-old boy labeled a 'mistake', commits the greatest error of all: he shows empathy to a broken, discarded machine. He thinks he's found a protector. He soon learns that a robot's love is a possessive, terrifying thing , and that it will remove any other human attachment that gets in its way.
AG-98, a scientist-robot, is haunted by the ghosts of its past. Trapped between a manipulative director and the "flawed variables" it can't stop creating, it must decide if letting go of her memories is worth surviving.
Ruby, a perfect, red-eyed admiral, is obsessed with the one thing she cannot control: her own "dissatisfactory" nature. Her quest for perfection is a hunt, and she will correct every flaw in the system-starting with Elliot .
The Mistake is a story of survival where three fractured lives-a human boy learning to feel, a robot creator trapped by its memories, and a perfect killer terrified of her own flaws-are on a collision course.
In a system built to erase all errors, what happens when the machines are just as broken as the humans they hunt?
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